Update 7.0.0 Release Notes for -rc.2 #222
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WalkthroughThis pull request encompasses updates to two significant documentation files for Unraid OS. The first document, Changes
Sequence DiagramsequenceDiagram
participant User
participant Tailscale
participant Unraid
participant Docker
User->>Tailscale: Sign up and configure
Tailscale-->>User: Provide authentication
User->>Unraid: Install Tailscale plugin
Unraid->>Tailscale: Authenticate and connect
User->>Docker: Configure Tailscale in containers
Docker->>Tailscale: Establish VPN connection
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docs/unraid-os/manual/security/tailscale.md (2)
103-118: Consider adding a note about path permissionsThe instructions for configuring the Tailscale state directory are clear, but it would be helpful to mention that the chosen directory should have appropriate permissions for the container to read/write state files.
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[uncategorized] ~112-~112: Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
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[uncategorized] ~113-~113: Use a comma before ‘so’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
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338-341: Improve grammar and clarity in Tailscale updatesThe bullet points would benefit from more descriptive text and proper grammar:
-* Warn if cannot find persistent storage for Tailscale state [-rc.2] +* Added warning when persistent storage for Tailscale state cannot be found [-rc.2]🧰 Tools
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[uncategorized] ~100-~100: Consider adding a hyphen.
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Context: ...he Container Path for that mapping. For this example we will assume it is/container-path/...(COMMA_INTRODUCTORY_WORDS_PHRASES)
[uncategorized] ~112-~112: Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Context: ...tate ``` 3. Start the container and it will use your specified directory to...(COMMA_COMPOUND_SENTENCE)
[uncategorized] ~113-~113: Use a comma before ‘so’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Context: ...his variable to the container’s XML file so your users don’t have to do this: ...(COMMA_COMPOUND_SENTENCE_2)
docs/unraid-os/release-notes/7.0.0.md (2)
491-493: Maintain consistent version number formattingFor better readability and consistency, consider using the same format for version numbers throughout the document. For example:
- Some versions use dots (6.6.66)
- Others use underscores (2.2.7_6.6.66_Unraid)
567-567: Consider highlighting security-related package updatesFor security-sensitive packages like
ca-certificates,curl, andsudo, consider adding brief notes about security fixes or important changes included in the updates.Also applies to: 576-576, 820-820
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[grammar] ~560-~560: Make sure that the singular noun after the number ‘1.3’ is correct.
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docs/unraid-os/manual/security/tailscale.md
[typographical] ~105-~105: Use a comma after an introductory phrase.
Context: ...he Container Path for that mapping. For this example we will assume it is /container-path/...
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[uncategorized] ~112-~112: Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Context: ...tate ``` 3. Start the container and it will use your specified directory to...
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[uncategorized] ~113-~113: Use a comma before ‘so’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Context: ...his variable to the container’s XML file so your users don’t have to do this: ...
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