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Update links in SPARQL update conformance for syntax #52

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12 changes: 10 additions & 2 deletions spec/index.html
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Expand Up @@ -1821,8 +1821,16 @@ <h3>Mapping Update Requests to the Formal Model</h3>
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<section id="conformance">
<h2>Conformance</h2>
<p>See <a href="#grammar">appendix B SPARQL 1.2 Update Grammar</a> regarding conformance of SPARQL Update strings.</p>
<p>This specification is intended for use in conjunction with: the [[[SPARQL12-GRAPH-STORE-PROTOCOL]]] and the [[[SPARQL12-PROTOCOL]]].</p>
<p>See
<a data-cite="SPARQL12-QUERY#dfn-sparql-update-string">SPARQL update string</a>
and the <a data-cite="SPARQL12-QUERY#grammar">SPARQL grammar</a>
regarding the SPARQL update language.
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Capitalization taken from the linked document. "Update Grammar" is only capitalized there when it's in a title; "Update String" and "Update Language" are capitalized within prose blocks.

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<p>See
<a data-cite="SPARQL12-QUERY#dfn-sparql-update-string">SPARQL update string</a>
and the <a data-cite="SPARQL12-QUERY#grammar">SPARQL grammar</a>
regarding the SPARQL update language.
<p>See
<a data-cite="SPARQL12-QUERY#dfn-sparql-update-string">SPARQL Update String</a>
and the <a data-cite="SPARQL12-QUERY#grammar">SPARQL grammar</a>
regarding the SPARQL Update Language.

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The PR on the other document makes it "SPARQL update string" because, elsewhere, it is "RDF string". This is making things more consistent across all our documents.

"SPARQL update language" is not a formal, defined term.
In titles, it might be "SPARQL Update Language".

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I think SPARQL Update string is a more sensible parallel to RDF string, because This document describes SPARQL 1.2 Update, an update language for RDF graphs.

(I do find SPARQL 1.2 Update, etc., to be clumsier than SPARQL Update 1.2, etc., and it may be worth revisiting these titles.)

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Upper-lower in the terminology looks odd. It's one phrase.

For the change of document title, you'll need to take that to the chairs. It's in the charter.

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Upper-lower in the terminology looks odd. It's one phrase.

SPARQL update (or SPARQL 1.2 update) doesn't exist.
SPARQL Update or SPARQL 1.2 Update does.

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See w3c/sparql-query#190.

This PR aligns to the grammar terminology in the query document.

</p>
<p>
This specification is intended for use in conjunction with:
the [[[SPARQL12-GRAPH-STORE-PROTOCOL]]]
and the [[[SPARQL12-PROTOCOL]]].
</p>
</section>
<section id="security-original">
<h2>Security Considerations</h2>
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