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src/debug_diagnostic.rs

@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ pub fn setup_alive_sheep_counter(
     let mut text_style = TextStyle::default();
     text_style.font_size = FONT_SIZE;
     let sheep_counter = commands
-        .spawn(TextBundle::from_section("Alive sheeps: ", text_style))
+        .spawn(TextBundle::from_section("Sheep alive: ", text_style))
         .insert(SheepAliveDebugCounter)
         .id();
 
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ pub fn alive_sheep_counter(
     let alive_sheep_count = sheeps.iter().count();
     for mut text in &mut query {
         text.sections[0].value = format!(
-            "Alive sheeps: {}/{}",
+            "Sheep alive: {}/{}",
             alive_sheep_count, start_sheep_count.0
         );
     }

src/finish_screen.rs

@@ -37,11 +37,11 @@ fn setup_finish_screen(mut commands: Commands, score: Res<Score>, fail: Option<R
     })).with_children(|parent| {
         let text = if let Some(fail) = fail {
             match fail.as_ref() {
-                FailReason::SheepDied => format!("Uh-oh. \nWhat bad luck, half the sheep have been eaten, try again :( \nIf you escape from the vampire."),
-                FailReason::TaskFailed(reason) => format!("Uh-oh. \nYou failed the task, try again :(\nReason: {} \nIf you escape from the vampire.", reason),
+                FailReason::SheepDied => format!("Uh-oh. \nWhat a bad dog. Half your sheep have been eaten, you fleay mutt. Await your punishment. \nIf you're alive afterwards, give it a decent try."),
+                FailReason::TaskFailed(reason) => format!("Uh-oh. Bad dog. \nYou failed, filthy mutt. \nReason: {} \nPrepare to be punished.", reason),
             }
         } else {
-            format!("Congratulations! \nYou survived your workday! \nYou did well, the vampire is waiting for you tomorrow.")
+            format!("Good dog! \nYou get to live another day. \nYou did well enough. Your master will be waiting for you tomorrow.")
         };
 
         parent.spawn(TextBundle::from_section(

src/global_task/sheep_escape.rs

@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ fn check_wave_finish(
 
         if sheep_wave_status.start_count - alived_sheep > loose_limit {
             commands.insert_resource(FailReason::TaskFailed(
-                "Half of the runaway sheep were eaten :(".to_string(),
+                "Half the runway flock has been eaten. That's giving bad dog, don't you think?".to_string(),
             ));
             game_state.set(GameState::Finish);
             global_task.set(GlobalTask::None);
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ fn check_wave_finish(
         }
     } else if next_wave.0.is_some() {
         for mut t in info_texts.iter_mut() {
-            t.sections[0].value = "The sheep are worried, wait for it".to_string();
+            t.sections[0].value = "Your flock is getting restless, wait for it".to_string();
         }
     } else if sheep_wave_status.start_count != 0 {
         for mut t in info_texts.iter_mut() {

src/global_task/torch_blinking.rs

@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ fn update_delight_system(
         if status.time_for_mission < 0.0 {
             gamestate.set(GameState::Finish);
             commands.insert_resource(FailReason::TaskFailed(format!(
-                "Not all the torches were lit. You should be better at waking up ancient vampires."
+                "Not enough torches lit. Seems like your master needed a good shove."
             )));
             return;
         }
@@ -156,14 +156,14 @@ fn update_delight_system(
             if status.start_sheep_count - lived_sheep_count > status.max_dead_sheep {
                 gamestate.set(GameState::Finish);
                 commands.insert_resource(FailReason::TaskFailed(format!(
-                    "Too many sheep was eaten. You should be better at waking up ancient vampires."
+                    "Too many of your flock got eaten. Seems like your master needed a good shove."
                 )));
                 return;
             }
         }
 
         if let Ok(mut text) = texts.get_single_mut() {
-            text.sections[0].value = format!("The torches are going out! Urgently wake up the shepherd to light the torches! {} / {} torches lit\n{:.0} seconds left. Dont let to eat more then {}", ok_torches, status.torches_to_lit.len(), status.time_for_mission, status.max_dead_sheep);
+            text.sections[0].value = format!("The torches are going out! Wake up the shepherd so he can light them! {} / {} torches lit\n{:.0} seconds left. Dont let to eat more then {}", ok_torches, status.torches_to_lit.len(), status.time_for_mission, status.max_dead_sheep);
         }
     }
 }

src/sheep.rs

@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ pub fn update_scared_sheeps(
                 }
                 if count > 0 {
                     let mean_nearest_sheep = mean_nearest_sheep / (count as f32);
-                    if (mean_nearest_sheep - dog_transform.translation).length() < dog_dpos.length() * 0.5 {
+                    if (mean_nearest_sheep - dog_transform.translation).length() < dog_dpos.length() * 0.8 {
                         walk.0 = dir * speed_amount;
                         scare.last_vel = walk.0;
                     } else {