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docs/topics/deepbook.md

@@ -1,3 +1,5 @@
 # DeepBook
 
-TBA
+Deepbook is a decentralized central limit order book (CLOB) native to Sui.
+
+In this chapter, we'll cover how to integrate it into our apps for market making.

docs/topics/ext-technology.md

@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
 # Extended Technology
 
-This topic covers every other Sui technology that is not part of the core technologies.
-It is important to mention that the term "core" is used loosely.
+This cover every other Sui technology that is not part of the core technologies.
 

docs/topics/misc.md

@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
 # Misc
 
-Everything else pertaining to Sui that's good to know
+This topic encompasses all the essential, general-purpose knowledge about Sui that’s simply good to have.

docs/topics/welcome.topic

@@ -13,22 +13,22 @@
         </description>
 
         <spotlight>
-            <a href="getting-started.topic" type="start" summary="Learn how to setup your Sui development environment">
+            <a href="getting-started.topic" type="start" summary="Learn how to setup your Sui development environment.">
             </a>
             <a href="Transactions.md" type="network"
-               summary="Learn how to construction Sui Transactions using both the SDK and PTB Studio">
+               summary="Learn how to construct Sui Transactions using both SDKs and PTB Studio.">
             </a>
         </spotlight>
 
         <misc>
             <cards>
                 <title>Extended Technologies</title>
                 <a href="deepbook.md"
-                   summary="Easily add Sui's global liquidity to your app">
+                   summary="Learn how to integrate Sui's global liquidity into your app.">
                     DeepBook
                 </a>
                 <a href="zklogin.topic"
-                   summary="Use web2 credentials with Sui in your app">
+                   summary="Discover how to integrate Web2 authentication methods into your Sui projects.">
                     zkLogin
                 </a>
             </cards>

docs/topics/zklogin.topic

@@ -5,15 +5,33 @@
        xsi:noNamespaceSchemaLocation="https://resources.jetbrains.com/writerside/1.0/topic.v2.xsd"
        title="zkLogin" id="zklogin" help-id="zkLogin">
     <show-structure for="tab,chapter,procedure" depth="2"/>
+    <p>zkLogin is a Sui primitive the enables us to use Web2 credentials on Sui.</p>
+    <p>This technology allows use to sign Sui Transactions using Web2 credentials from providers like Google, Facebook,
+        and Slack
+    </p>
+    Follow the steps below to integrate zkLogin into your app:
+
+
     <tabs>
         <tab id="android-install" title="Android">
+            Let's begin by adding dependency to the <b>ZeroAuth</b> Android zkLogin SDK. To do that,
+            add the following to your projects' app module dependency block:
         <code-block lang="kotlin">
-           implementation("xyz.mcxross.bcs:bcs-android:&lt;$bcs_version&gt;")
+           implementation("xyz.mcxross.zero:auth-android:&lt;$zklogin_version&gt;")
         </code-block>
             <p>After installation, you can then use it as follows:</p>
             <code-block lang="kotlin" src="zkLogin-android.kt" include-lines="1-15"/>
-            <p>You can the trigger the login process as follows:</p>
+            <p>The code above is how we'll retrieve our Sign In results.</p>
+            <p>In order to receive the results, we must trigger the login process as follows:</p>
             <code-block lang="kotlin" src="zkLogin-android.kt" include-lines="18-27"/>
         </tab>
+        <tab id="ios-install" title="iOS">
+            To be added
+        </tab>
     </tabs>
+
+    The code above shows how to do zkLogin using Google as the Provider, however, the follow
+    is generally the same for all other supported providers.
+
+    For detailed information on <b>ZeroAuth</b>, go <a href="https://zeroauth.com">here</a>
 </topic>