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 I'm from the Appalachian Mountains, but I try to not sound too much like a hillbilly.
 
 I would like to note that I have absolutely no freakin idea what I'm doing.
-I do not particularly enjoy writing. I've never tried to improve, and I've always hated writing classes.
+I do not particularly enjoy writing. I've always hated writing classes.
 I have read an unreasonable number of books, and I give them all the credit for any ability I have.
-I've never had a teacher who liked my writing style or (often) product. I've always considered it a weakness of mine.
-But I simply don't have another way to get my thoughts out somewhere that others might see them.
+I have never had a teacher who liked my writing style or (often) product. 
+I have always considered writing a weakness of mine.
+I simply don't have another way to get my thoughts out somewhere that others may see them.
 
 Contact me at [email protected].
 
-Help fund my dream to find, buy, restore, and upgrade a '95 Impreza ($140 of the way there lol):
+Help fund my dream to find, buy, restore, and upgrade a '95 Impreza coupe:
 BTC 3PSXHWgxhCmXxz6DzD8nntsFU1d6n8xp4u
+Those who have contributed to the $230 I have received so far, thank you. As a broke and married college student, it's really a blessing and helps me keep writing.
 
 Also I hate coding websites.
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