Do editorial pass on playdate

Author: janhohenheim

content/news/052/index.md

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 ### [Rusty Playdate]
 
+![The Playdate console](../051/playdate.png)  
+_The Playdate console_
+
 [Rusty Playdate] ([GitHub][Rusty Playdate], [Mastodon][Rusty Playdate Masto]) by [@boozook](https://github.com/boozook)
 is the large set of crates with bindings, toolset for the full cycle of creating games for the [Playdate handheld console][playdate].
 
 Big part of the Rusty Playdate project is the `cargo-playdate` tool ([Crates.io][cargo-playdate crates-io], [GitHub][cargo-playdate gh])
-that helps to build game for [Playdate] hardware or simulator. It works as cargo-plugin as well as standalone.
-The tool not only manages the compilation of your program, but also builds assets for the crate and __its dependencies__, generates a manifest,
-and assembles it all into a bundle that runs on the device or simulator.
-In this month cargo-playdate v0.5 has been [released][Rusty Playdate Release] and received massive refactoring, bugfixes and new features:
-- support of [cargo's auto-targets][cargo-target-auto-discovery] _(targets such as `bin` or `example` that isn't declared in the Cargo.toml)_
-- [target-specific package-info][pdb-pdxinfo-override] inheritance by main package-info
-- `package.metadata.playdate.options` inheritance by `workspace.metadata`
-- incremental builds now works as should - fixed an old problem where the tool corrupts cargo's cache, so triggering full rebuild
-
-<!-- Note, "target" above means cargo-target (lib, bin, example, etc..), not a rustc/llvm-target/compile-kind/target-triple -->
-
-Also updated register decoder in the [`pd-symbolize-crashlog`][playdate-symbolize-v0.2.0],
-now it properly decodes all available registers such as
+that helps to build games for [Playdate] hardware or a simulator. It works as a cargo-plugin as well as standalone.
+The tool 
+- manages the compilation of your program,
+- builds assets for the crate and its dependencies,
+- generates a manifest,
+- and assembles it all into a bundle that runs on the device or a simulator.
+
+In this month `cargo-playdate` v0.5 has been [released][Rusty Playdate Release] and received massive refactoring, bugfixes and new features:
+- support of [cargo's auto-targets][cargo-target-auto-discovery] _(targets such as `bin` or `example` that aren't declared in the Cargo.toml)_
+- [target-specific package-info][pdb-pdxinfo-override] inheritance from the main package-info
+- `package.metadata.playdate.options` inheritance from the `workspace.metadata`
+- incremental builds now work as expected - fixed an old problem where the tool corrupts cargo's cache, which triggered full rebuild
+
+The register decoder in the [`pd-symbolize-crashlog`][playdate-symbolize-v0.2.0] was also updated. 
+It now it properly decodes all available registers such as
 <abbr title="Program Status Register, combines APSR, IPSR and EPSR">PSR</abbr>,
-<abbr title="Configurable Fault Status Register, combines UFSR, BFSR and MMFSR">CFSR</abbr>,
+<abbr title="Configurable Fault Status Register, combines UFSR, BFSR and MMFSR">CFSR</abbr>, and
 <abbr title="HardFault Status Register">HSFR</abbr>.
 
 _Discussions: [GitHub][Rusty Playdate Gh-discuss], [Matrix][Rusty Playdate Matrix]._