last-minute change

Author: HeikoTheissen

docs/odata-protocol/odata-protocol.html

@@ -2326,12 +2326,12 @@ <h4 id="11411-use-of-etags-for-avoiding-update-conflicts"><a id="UseofETagsforAv
 <p>If the client does not specify an <a href="#HeaderIfMatch"><code>If-Match</code></a> request header in a <a href="#DataModification">Data Modification Request</a> or <a href="#Actions">Action Request</a> on a resource that requires optimistic concurrency control, the service responds with a <code>428 Precondition Required</code> and MUST ensure that no observable change occurs as a result of the request. Clients can attempt to disable optimistic concurrency control by specifying <code>If-Match</code> with a value of <code>*</code>. Services MAY reject such requests.</p>
 <p>For requests including an <a href="#HeaderODataVersion"><code>OData-Version</code></a> header value of <code>4.01</code>, any ETag values specified in the request body of a <a href="#UpdateanEntity">request to modify an entity</a> MUST be <code>*</code> or match the current value for the record being updated.</p>
 <div class="example">
-<p>Example <a id="antietag" href="#antietag">81</a>: <code>Category</code> is a single-valued nullable non-containment navigation property on the product entity type. Note that an ETag used in the <code>If-Match</code> header in the request</p>
+<p>Example <a id="antietag" href="#antietag">81</a>: <code>Category</code> is a single-valued nullable non-containment navigation property on the product entity type. Note that an ETag used in the <code>If-Match</code> header in the following request applies to the category currently associated with the product.</p>
 <div class="sourceCode" id="cb99"><pre class="sourceCode json"><code class="sourceCode json"><span id="cb99-1"><a href="#cb99-1" aria-hidden="true" tabindex="-1"></a><span class="er">PATCH</span> <span class="er">http://host/service/Products(57)/Category</span></span>
 <span id="cb99-2"><a href="#cb99-2" aria-hidden="true" tabindex="-1"></a><span class="er">If-Match:</span> <span class="er">&quot;&lt;ETag&gt;&quot;</span></span>
 <span id="cb99-3"><a href="#cb99-3" aria-hidden="true" tabindex="-1"></a></span>
 <span id="cb99-4"><a href="#cb99-4" aria-hidden="true" tabindex="-1"></a><span class="fu">{</span><span class="dt">&quot;CategoryID&quot;</span><span class="fu">:</span> <span class="dv">5</span><span class="fu">}</span></span></code></pre></div>
-<p>applies to the category currently associated with the product. To make the category update conditional on the ETag of the product, the following request could be made instead:</p>
+<p>To make the category update conditional on the ETag of the product, the following request could be made instead:</p>
 <div class="sourceCode" id="cb100"><pre class="sourceCode json"><code class="sourceCode json"><span id="cb100-1"><a href="#cb100-1" aria-hidden="true" tabindex="-1"></a><span class="er">PATCH</span> <span class="er">http://host/service/Products(57)</span></span>
 <span id="cb100-2"><a href="#cb100-2" aria-hidden="true" tabindex="-1"></a><span class="er">If-Match:</span> <span class="er">&quot;&lt;ETag&gt;&quot;</span></span>
 <span id="cb100-3"><a href="#cb100-3" aria-hidden="true" tabindex="-1"></a></span>

docs/odata-protocol/odata-protocol.md

@@ -4147,14 +4147,15 @@ for the record being updated.
 
 ::: example
 Example <a id="antietag" href="#antietag">81</a>: `Category` is a single-valued nullable non-containment navigation property
-on the product entity type. Note that an ETag used in the `If-Match` header in the request
+on the product entity type. Note that an ETag used in the `If-Match` header in the following request
+applies to the category currently associated with the product.
 ```json
 PATCH http://host/service/Products(57)/Category
 If-Match: "<ETag>"
 
 {"CategoryID": 5}
 ```
-applies to the category currently associated with the product. To make the category
+To make the category
 update conditional on the ETag of the product, the following request could be made instead:
 ```json
 PATCH http://host/service/Products(57)

odata-protocol/11.4 Data Modification.md

@@ -75,14 +75,15 @@ for the record being updated.
 
 ::: example
 Example ##ex_antietag: `Category` is a single-valued nullable non-containment navigation property
-on the product entity type. Note that an ETag used in the `If-Match` header in the request
+on the product entity type. Note that an ETag used in the `If-Match` header in the following request
+applies to the category currently associated with the product.
 ```json
 PATCH http://host/service/Products(57)/Category
 If-Match: "<ETag>"
 
 {"CategoryID": 5}
 ```
-applies to the category currently associated with the product. To make the category
+To make the category
 update conditional on the ETag of the product, the following request could be made instead:
 ```json
 PATCH http://host/service/Products(57)