diff --git a/_posts/2024-06-29-family-fun-24.md b/_posts/2024-06-29-family-fun-24.md
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--- a/_posts/2024-06-29-family-fun-24.md
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-title: Thatcham family fun day
+title: Thatcham Family Fun Day
 categories: [External-Event]
-excerpt: Once again this year we will be attending the Thatcham Family Fun Day on Henwick Worthy Sports Field.
+excerpt: Once again this year we attended the Thatcham Family Fun Day on Henwick Worthy Sports Field.
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 Come and see some of our members projects and have a go at driving a radio controlled Droid, sucessfully complete one circuit and be awarded your Droid driving licence. We will also have a wide selection of items our members have been making with our equipment.
diff --git a/_posts/2024-08-22-control-tower-model.md b/_posts/2024-08-22-control-tower-model.md
index aeaa111..a73340a 100644
--- a/_posts/2024-08-22-control-tower-model.md
+++ b/_posts/2024-08-22-control-tower-model.md
@@ -5,6 +5,6 @@ categories: [Members-Project]
 excerpt: Model of Greenham Common Control Tower
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-Member created a model of the Control Tower to display in the vistor centre.
+One of our member's created a model of the Control Tower at Greenham Common to display in the vistor centre. The Control Tower is worth a visit if you are out walking on the Common, so be sure to check out the model.
 
 ![](/images/control-tower-model.png)