Tweak wording of demo in README.adoc

Author: leif81

README.adoc

@@ -22,8 +22,8 @@ image::screenshot.png[title="bzkanban example board"]
 
 == Demo
 
-Note: These below links are to live production Bugzilla instances being viewed with bzkanban.
-If you log in with your account and making changes to the bugs it should be done with the same respect and awareness as if you were using the native Bugzilla interface.
+Note: These below links are to live production Bugzilla instances, viewed with bzkanban.
+Any changes made will be applied to the production Bugzilla instance with your account, so apply the same careful consideration as you would when using the native Bugzilla UI.
 
 - https://leif81.github.io/bzkanban/index.html?product=Bugzilla&milestone=Bugzilla+6.0&assignee=&comments=false&site=https%3A%2F%2Fbugzilla.mozilla.org[Mozilla Bugzilla]