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- Harmless, right? + Harmless, don't you think? Every polygon would be happy with a mixed neighborhood. - Surely their small bias can't affect the larger shape society that much? + Surely their small bias couldn't affect the larger shape society that much! Well...

- drag & drop unhappy polygons until nobody is unhappy:
+ drag & drop the unhappy polygons until nobody is unhappy:
(just move them to random empty spots. don't think too much about it.)
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- And... our shape society becomes super segregated. Daaaaang. + And... our shape of society becomes super segregated. Daaaaang.

- Sometimes a neighborhood just becomes square, + Sometimes a neighborhood just becomes too square, and it's not their fault if no triangles wanna stick around. - And a triangular neighborhood would welcome a square, but + Though a triangular neighborhood would welcome a square, but they can't help it if squares ain't interested.

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@@ -130,13 +130,13 @@ What's up with that? These are good shapes, nice shapes. And yet, though every individual only has a slight bias, the entire shape society cracks and splits.

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Small individual bias can lead to large collective bias.

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Equality is an unstable equilibrium. The smallest of bias can push a whole society past the tipping point. Well, what if we taught these shapes to have zero bias? @@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ What if the threshold was at 50%? Seems reasonable for a shape to prefer not being in the minority...

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- See what doesn't happen? + See what doesn't happen? No change. No mixing back together. In a world where bias ever existed, being unbiased isn't enough! We're gonna need active measures. What if shapes wanted to seek out just a lil' more variety?

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At first, going out on your own can be isolating... but by working together, step by step, we'll get there. @@ -324,7 +324,7 @@

- Our "playable post" was inspired by Bret Victor's + Our "playable post" was inspired by Bret Victor's Explorable Explanations and Ian Bogost's @@ -340,7 +340,7 @@ Donate to Diversity!
Black Girls Code - - gives coding lessons to girls of color + - gives coding lessons to girls of color
Girls Who Code - teaches high school girls to code @@ -429,4 +429,4 @@ - \ No newline at end of file + diff --git a/play/manual/manual.html b/play/manual/manual.html deleted file mode 100644 index a79915b..0000000 --- a/play/manual/manual.html +++ /dev/null @@ -1,15 +0,0 @@ - - - - Manual Simulation - - - - -

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- - - - - \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/play/mini/mini_bored.html b/play/mini/mini_bored.html index 53f86ca..1217efe 100644 --- a/play/mini/mini_bored.html +++ b/play/mini/mini_bored.html @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
meh: - all neighbors are like me. (also meh if i've got no neighbors) + All neighbors are like me. (Also, meh if I've got no neighbors.)
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