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- Harmless, right? + Harmless, don't you think? Every polygon would be happy with a mixed neighborhood. - Surely their small bias can't affect the larger shape society that much? + Surely their small bias couldn't affect the larger shape society that much! Well...
- And... our shape society becomes super segregated. Daaaaang. + And... our shape of society becomes super segregated. Daaaaang.
- Sometimes a neighborhood just becomes square, + Sometimes a neighborhood just becomes too square, and it's not their fault if no triangles wanna stick around. - And a triangular neighborhood would welcome a square, but + Though a triangular neighborhood would welcome a square, but they can't help it if squares ain't interested.
- +@@ -130,13 +130,13 @@ What's up with that? These are good shapes, nice shapes. And yet, though every individual only has a slight bias, the entire shape society cracks and splits.
- +Small individual bias can lead to large collective bias.
-+
Equality is an unstable equilibrium. The smallest of bias can push a whole society past the tipping point. Well, what if we taught these shapes to have zero bias? @@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ What if the threshold was at 50%? Seems reasonable for a shape to prefer not being in the minority...
- +- See what doesn't happen? + See what doesn't happen? No change. No mixing back together. In a world where bias ever existed, being unbiased isn't enough! We're gonna need active measures. What if shapes wanted to seek out just a lil' more variety?
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At first, going out on your own can be isolating...
but by working together, step by step, we'll get there.
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- Our "playable post" was inspired by Bret Victor's
+ Our "playable post" was inspired by Bret Victor's
Explorable Explanations and Ian Bogost's
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- - gives coding lessons to girls of color
+ - gives coding lessons to girls of color
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- teaches high school girls to code
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