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smowton · JLLeitschuh · commit 36bb84d97fe7 · 2021-11-25T12:55:55.000-05:00
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 lgtm,codescanning
-* Improve support for [Ratpack](https://ratpack.io/) HTTP framework.
-  Added data flow models for `ratpack.func.Pair`, and `ratpack.exec.Result`.
-  Improve data flow models for `ratpack.exec.Promise`.
+* Improved support for the [Ratpack](https://ratpack.io/) HTTP framework: added data-flow models of `ratpack.func.Pair` and `ratpack.exec.Result`, and improved models of `ratpack.exec.Promise`.
