Adjust names, description

Author: ThomasQuesadilla

index.bs

@@ -1491,8 +1491,8 @@ is "<code>[=aggregatable source registration time configuration/include=]</code>
 this is 0.
 
 <dfn>Max attribution report time-to-live</dfn> is a positive [=duration=] that
-controls the max amount of time an attribution report can exist before no longer
-able to being sent.
+controls the maximum amount of time an attribution report can exist before
+expiring without being sent.
 
 <dfn>Max event-level reports per attribution destination</dfn> is a positive integer that
 controls how many [=event-level reports=] can be in the
@@ -4688,10 +4688,10 @@ To <dfn>queue reports for delivery</dfn> given a [=set=] of
          forms of interruption, including shutdown, the user agent may need to
          persist reports that are in the process of being sent in some other
          storage.
-    1. Let |reportLifeTime| be the lesser of |report|'s
+    1. Let |startTime| be the lesser of |report|'s
         [=attribution report/source time=] and [=attribution report/trigger time=].
-    1. If [=current wall time=] - |reportLifeTime| is less than or equal to
-        [=Max attribution report time-to-live=], [=list/append=] |report| to
+    1. If [=current wall time=] - |startTime| is less than or equal to
+        [=max attribution report time-to-live=], [=list/append=] |report| to
         |reportsToSend|.
 1. [=shuffle a list|Shuffle=] |reportsToSend|.