Final tweaks from Beth

Author: drphilmarshall

whitepaper/introduction.tex

@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
 \def\chpname{intro}\label{chp:\chpname}
 
 Chapter editors:
-\credit{bethwillman},
 \credit{connolly},
 \credit{ivezic},
-\credit{drphilmarshall}.
+\credit{drphilmarshall},
+\credit{michaelstrauss}.
 
 The Large Synoptic Survey Telescope (LSST) is a dedicated optical
 telescope with an effective aperture of 6.7 meters, currently under

whitepaper/preface.tex

@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@ \chapter*{Preface}
 understanding of that problem (a process we might think of as  ``cadence
 diplomacy''). Its audience is the LSST science community, Science
 Advisory Committee and Project Science Team: this white paper is   {\it
-the} vehicle for the community to communicate to the LSST Project as the
-final observing strategy is designed.
+the} vehicle for the community to communicate to the LSST Project while
+the baseline observing strategy continues to be improved.
 
 \noindent The white paper's modular design allows pieces of it to be
 split off and published in a series of snapshot journal papers, as the