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developer just getting into coding Discord bots, or an advanced bot developer who has decided to proceed with `disnake`
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as their library of choice.
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The concept we will be going over, include:
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The concepts this guide will be going over include:
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- How to get started on working with bots;
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- How to create and organize commands, using cogs/extensions;
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- Working with databases (such as [`sqlite (aiosqlite)`][sqlite-docs] and [`mongodb (motor)`][motor-docs]);
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- How to get started on working with bots
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- How to create and organize commands, using cogs/extensions
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- Working with databases (such as [`sqlite (aiosqlite)`][sqlite-docs] and [`mongodb (motor)`][motor-docs])
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- Using the [`AutoShardedClient`](https://disnake.readthedocs.io/en/stable/api.html#disnake.AutoShardedClient) class
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to shard your bot;
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to shard your bot
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- A plethora of examples with popular topics along with in-depth explanation, and much more!
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[sqlite-docs]: https://aiosqlite.omnilib.dev/en/latest/
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[motor-docs]: https://motor.readthedocs.io/en/stable/tutorial-asyncio.html
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This guide will showcase the various features and events that our library has, while giving you an idea of how these
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functions work together as well as how the syntax looks in production.
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This guide will showcase the various features and events that the library has,
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while giving you an idea of how these functions work together as well as how a project might look in production.
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## Disclaimer
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We appreciate the process of making Discord bots, but creating a bot with `disnake` requires a decent amount of
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experience on working with Python and object-oriented programming. While you _can_ go forward and make a bot with little
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to no knowledge of Python or programming, doing so will only hinder your progress and cause issues in the future.
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to no knowledge of Python or programming, doing so may hinder your progress and cause issues in the future.
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If you don't know Python but would like to learn more, here are a few resources to get you started:
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An extensive list of these resources can be found on
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[Python's official website](https://wiki.python.org/moin/BeginnersGuide/NonProgrammers). Once you're more experienced
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with Python, you can come back here to get started!
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[Python's official website](https://wiki.python.org/moin/BeginnersGuide/NonProgrammers). Once you feel
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a little more experienced with Python, you can come back here to get started!
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## Links & Credits
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This guide is made using [**Docusaurus**](https://docusaurus.io/), a static site generator geared towards building
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project documentation. The package utilized for Discord-like message elements is Danktuary's [`@discord-message-components/react`](https://www.npmjs.com/package/@discord-message-components/react).
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The idea of building a guide that showcases the use of `disnake`'s syntax was inspired from
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The idea of building a guide that showcases the use of `disnake`'s syntax and features was inspired from
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[**Discord.js**](https://discord.js.org/), one of the most popular JavaScript Discord libraries; their guide can be
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found [here](https://discordjs.guide/). The credit for the initial directory structure and articles, goes to them.
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found [here](https://discordjs.guide/). The credit for the initial directory and articles structure goes to them.
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Since this project started as members-only, the credits for a majority of the initial content go to our organization
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members - **thesadru**, **shiftinv**, **Victorsitou**, **vcokltfre**, **m1raynee** and **AbhigyanTrips**. We also thank
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to all contributors on the repository, who strive to make the guide better.
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We also thank all contributors on the repository, who strive to make the guide better.
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Lastly, a huge thanks to **you**, the members of the `disnake` community, for supporting our library and choosing us for
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your bot development journey. We as the authors of this guide aim to familiarize users on coding Discord bots with our

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