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Author: i-am-sijia

docs/dev-guide/components/telecommute_status.md

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 (component-telecommute_status)=
-#Telecommute Status
+# Telecommute Status
 
 ```{eval-rst}
 .. currentmodule:: activitysim.abm.models.telecommute_status
 ```
 
-The ActivitySim telecommute model consists of two long term submodels - 
+ActivitySim telecommute representation consists of two long term submodels - 
 a person [work_from_home](work_from_home) model and 
 a person [telecommute_frequency](telecommute_frequency) model. 
 The work from home model predicts if a worker works exclusively from home, 
-whereas the telecommute frequency model predicts number of days in a week a worker telecommuters, if they do not exclusively work from home. 
-However, neither of them predicts whether a worker is telecommuting or not on the simulation day. 
-This telecommute status model extends the previous two models to predicts for all workers whether they
-are telecommuting on the simulation day.
+whereas the telecommute frequency model predicts number of days in a week a worker telecommuters, 
+if they do not exclusively work from home. 
+However, neither of them predicts whether a worker telecommutes or not on the simulation day. 
+This telecommute status model extends the previous two models to predict for all workers whether 
+they telecommute on the simulation day.
 
 A simple implementation of the telecommute status model can be based on the worker's telecommute frequency.
-For example, if a worker telecommutes 4 days a week, then there is a 80% probability for them to telecommute on the simulation day. 
+For example, if a worker telecommutes 4 days a week, then there is a 80% probability for them 
+to telecommute on the simulation day. 
 The telecommute status model software can accommodate more complex model forms if needed.
 
 There have been discussions on exactly where the telecommute status model should be added
-in the model sequence. Some suggest it should be applied to all workers before the CDAP model; some suggest 
-it should be applied after the CDAP model, only to workers who have work activities (regardless of in-home or
-out-of-home). The Consortium is currently engaged in an explicit telecommute design task as part pf Phase 9B,
+in the model sequence. Some suggest it should be applied to all workers before the CDAP model; 
+some suggest it should be applied after the CDAP model only to workers who have work activities 
+during the day regardless of in-home or out-of-home (which requires change in CDAP definition). 
+The Consortium is currently engaged in an explicit telecommute design task as part pf Phase 9B,
 out of which more guidance on the model sequence will be established.
 
 The main interface to the telecommute status model is the
-[telecommute_status](activitysim.abm.models.telecommute_status) function.  This
+[telecommute_status](activitysim.abm.models.telecommute_status) function. This
 function is registered as an Inject step in the example Pipeline.
 
 ## Structure